On my last elevator pitch I got very positive feedback, people told me not to worry about what others thought and just focus on my business. A lot of people thought my pitch was as good as it could get for a one-minute video and that I did a good job in discerning what information was the most important to include, and what was just not important enough to waste any second on for such a short video. The only constrictive criticism given was to slow down my speaking. I tried to slow down my speaking enough to just sound like personality, but still talk about everything I wanted to mention. I definitely am the happiest with how this pict turned out of the four I've done. I only said "um" twice and I even cam up with a catch phrase for my business at the end.
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